The editor asked me to rewrite my article for a non-technical audience.

When you're a seventeen year-old full of spunk and Ideas, a loving home can seem a straightjacket, never mind a buildingful of orphan brats and illegitimate bastards.

She slid the goody out into her hand and gave a little aww. He'd baked her a dark chocolate cookie with a white heart swirled on the top. “You are so sweet. I'm going to save this for later, when I need a little pick-me-up, ...

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